I am not good with writing articles.

I was wondering if you could take a look, and give me some tips, suggestions, etc.

I am going to submit to the article sites, which will pick it up and publish it all over blogs and websites.

my email is admin@mywebwii

Is there anything wrong with it?

http://mywebwii.com/category/homebrew-channel

Everything I sell is handcrafted from silver, gold and gemstones, and my customers have all been very complimentary. I don’t have a huge marketing budget, so I would like some advice on the most effective ways to get the right people to notice me. I have had a small article in the local press, and I have a website.

I’m currently doing article marketing.
Oh btw I forgot to mention that I’ve posted my articles to Ezinearticles, Articlebase and a few other article submitters.

In my opinion they did. First the so-called article is filled with links to online universties who must be paying Yahoo a fee. Second the salaries are completely unrealistic for entry level jobs. No college graduate without years of experience is going to land a marketing manager job for K.

http://education.yahoo.net/degrees/articles/featured_preparing_for_entry_level_jobs.html

I like Yahoo, but believe this highly deceptive article is below them.

I’m currently doing article marketing but would like to do "Social Network Marketing."